summercomfort | (no subject)

I'm at an interesting moment in Tisquantum, where the primary conflict is internal, and thus would be a lot easier if I had either thought bubbles or voiceover. But... I'm afraid to start the trend now, in Chapter 2. Would I be able to follow it through for the rest of the chapters? Would I be able to go back and add it in for the previous 40 pages?

I'm currently drawn up through page 9 of this chapter, and I got another 2 pages laid out last night. Interestingly, I think I'm at the same juncture I was around page 7 the first chapter and page 4 in the Prologue, where I've essentially set up the conflict, but my original idea of resolving it doesn't feel right. So I've spent the majority of today either typing random words into my "Tisquantum Big Picture Story Thoughts," or watching hilarious Captain America interviews on youtube.

I think I've finally got the larger arc of this chapter figured out, though. Now, to figure out if voiceovers or thought bubbles should be a thing.