Edited Tisquantum

[summercomfort]

Thank you so much Satyreyes and yeloson for your feedback!

I've spent the last 2 weeks editing and drawing additional panels to the first pages. Please take a look and see if it has improved!

http://sushusketches.dreamwidth.org/18108.html

Specifically:
- the relationship between Mosq and Sasaso
- the weight of Mosq's death
- the end panels more "end"-like

Thanks so much!!